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May 3, 2012
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*BigMac1212 May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I think the proportions are right. I don't mind the lady's arm hanging over the robot's arm. I think this is looking good so far.
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~AlkuraDemoralManeke May 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really all I see is the arm of the woman that hangs over the robot's arm is at an angle that hurts like a mofo to achieve (why yes I did try it) Unless she was injured I don't think she'd have it like that but then again I have no idea what the premise of this picture is. But it's just looking too far back basically. Rotate the shoulder forward a bit and see how that is.
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=SoVeryUnofficial May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOW DARE YOU-okay I'm kidding. :)
I should foreshorten that arm towards us instead of cricking it waaaaay back there. (See, this is why I need better manikins...) maybe shift his fingers over so her arm falls in a more natural pose?
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~AlkuraDemoralManeke May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yea. I actually laid myself over my giant armchair and tried to put my arm like that and I was like "OW MOTHERFUCKAODIUDBDBBVEDYKBVCESSQIVDSW!!" as I put my shoulder back in the socket and thanked Jegus for my trick joints.
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=SoVeryUnofficial May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, snot cuz the lady's an elf means skeletons don't work on her.
Only Dittos can get away with that stuff.
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~AlkuraDemoralManeke May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol yes. God woman you cause me to test the limits of human anatomy!!
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=SoVeryUnofficial May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bitch ah do what ah want wif yo body. Foo'.
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~AlkuraDemoralManeke May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You know it took me a moment to figure out what the hell you were tying to say and then when I figured it out I was just like *loud guffawing of doom that makes my grandma wake up and skin me alive*
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=SoVeryUnofficial May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Leprechaun ebonics. It confuses the best of us.
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*TaleSpinnerGypsy May 3, 2012  Professional General Artist
In general, everything looks fine. The only questionable area TO ME is the robot's left knee. I somehow get the impression that it could stand to be a touch more rounded at the point. :hmm:
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