Really all I see is the arm of the woman that hangs over the robot's arm is at an angle that hurts like a mofo to achieve (why yes I did try it) Unless she was injured I don't think she'd have it like that but then again I have no idea what the premise of this picture is. But it's just looking too far back basically. Rotate the shoulder forward a bit and see how that is.
HOW DARE YOU-okay I'm kidding. I should foreshorten that arm towards us instead of cricking it waaaaay back there. (See, this is why I need better manikins...) maybe shift his fingers over so her arm falls in a more natural pose?
Yea. I actually laid myself over my giant armchair and tried to put my arm like that and I was like "OW MOTHERFUCKAODIUDBDBBVEDYKBVCESSQIVDSW!!" as I put my shoulder back in the socket and thanked Jegus for my trick joints.
You know it took me a moment to figure out what the hell you were tying to say and then when I figured it out I was just like *loud guffawing of doom that makes my grandma wake up and skin me alive*
In general, everything looks fine. The only questionable area TO ME is the robot's left knee. I somehow get the impression that it could stand to be a touch more rounded at the point.
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